Group 2: Janice & Ralph

In this task, Janice is the first person who writes this posts according to the pictures. Ralph, please do use different colors if you are going to edit her existed content or add any other texts.


1. Janice:
Content:

Moon festival is coming next Saturday. My friends and I planned to eat barbecue on that day. We haven’t met each other since we graduated from elementary school. In order to have more time for chatting, after having dinner, we will go to Love River because there is a firework show at that night. I just can’t wait to see the beautiful fireworks. By the way, my mom had bought some delicious moon cakes which have different flavors, and I especially like the ice cream flavor. I think I’ll have a great time with my friends and family members for sure.

Janice's questions:
Is there any grammar problem in my article, such as tense?

Janice's ideas:
Perhaps I should mention more details in the article.

2. Ralph
Content:
Moon festival is coming next Saturday. I have looked forward to it for a long time. My friends and I planned to eat barbecue on that day. We haven’t met each other since we graduated from elementary school. In order to have more time for chatting, after having dinner, we will go to Love River because there is a firework show at that night. I just can’t wait to see the beautiful fireworks. I will bring my digital camera bought last week to capture the breathtaking view. By the way, my mom had bought some delicious moon cakes which have different flavors, and I especially like the ice cream flavor. I think I’ll have a great time with my friends and family members for sure.

Janice's questions:


Janice's ideas: